結(jié)構(gòu)，宏觀到微觀層層遞進(jìn)，講細(xì)充分論據(jù)，所有分論點支持總論點

鑲嵌結(jié)構(gòu)，先寫結(jié)果，再寫影響，字?jǐn)?shù)不夠解釋必要名詞(what how why)

例證細(xì)節(jié)從 開頭 經(jīng)過 結(jié)果選擇填充

例子練習(xí)

take the case that 考研national post graduate entrance examination 專升本 upgrade from college ,as a result,studengts who promote their academic qualifications receive more resonable occupations.

had it not been long.term career grown, the choice of?the students future would be very limited.

furthermore,the face that email has more advantages due to its low cost indicates that email has more advantages.

take the case of 學(xué)校招生辦scool admission office，who receives applications in different areas online.as a result,this solution stimulate school efficiency and also make the process more convenient.

had it not been for emil connectnion,solving office documents would never been such proficient.

furthermore,the fact that email transport messages from distance indicats that email has nore disadvantages.

take the case of 視頻通話video talk，面對面談話，which people would prefer to change their ideas more efficiency and flexibility.making people more close to each other.

had it not been for communicating in a more directly way,message transport would hardly satisfing humans' emotional requirements.

寫錯了，應(yīng)該寫壞處,如果不是email人們的距離不會如此之遠(yuǎn)