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?Recently,?our?class?have?had?a?heated?discussion?concerning?that?whether?the?Beijing?Zoo??should?be?moved?out?of?the?city.?Some?of?my?classmates?approved?of?the?moving.?They?say???large?crowds?of?tourist?to?the?zoo?will?result?in?traffic?jams.?They?also?say?that?once?moving,? ?animals?will?have?more?space?and?good?living?conditions?in?the?suburbs.?Therefore,?other?students?against?the?idea.?They?say?that?the?zoo?has?the?history?of?100?years,?and?is?famous?at?home?or?abroad.?Moreover,?moving?may?cause?the?dead?of?some?animals.?So,?it's?a?better? ??choice?to?remain?where?it?is.