七七 | 如何“翻譯”中文情節(jié)

1??如何快速消滅中式英語

一個簡單句有且只能有一個謂語動詞。

翻譯：今天這視頻有奸多人看。這個老師肯定講得很好！

• 轉(zhuǎn)化：好多人看這個視頻因為這個老師教得很好！
• Many students are watching this video because the teacher teaches well.
• 轉(zhuǎn)化：好多人看這個視頻所以我猜這個老師教得很好!
• Many students are watching this video so I guess (that) the teacher teaches well.

很多：A lot of / a number of / plenty of / millions of

1. 英文一定要有明確且準確的動作發(fā)出者（主語）
2. 英文需要連詞來銜接句子，呈現(xiàn)兩句的邏輯

1. 9磅15便士不夠買一件好襯衫。

You can't buy a good shirt with 9 pounds and 15 pence.

2. 山高人為峰。

When you climb to the top of the mountain you are / become the summit of the mountain.

3. 神農(nóng)喝了幾口，覺得很提神。

①After Shen Nong sipped the water, he felt refreshed.

②Shen Nong sipped the water and found it was refreshing.

take a few sips：淺嘗幾口

①Shen Nong took a few sips of the water and felt refreshed.

②Shen Nong took a few sips of the water and found it very refreshing.